Ds#4 won 2nd place in the library's poetry contest for Kindergarden. The theme this year was "If I could go anywhere..." In the K-12th competition, there were 900 entries submitted this year. I think all the kids did a great job!!
Ds#4 had all the ideas, I looked up words in our Rhyming Dictionary (I've LOVED that thing!) and suggested them to him, and he came up with the line. I did help him with meter and syllabication, but the rest was all him.
People have asked him what a canimal is. He made it up when he didn't like the words available to rhyme with animal. He described it to me and submitted a picture of one with his poem.
Rescuing Animals
If I could go anywhere, I’d rescue an animal.
I like them a lot,
but I’ve never heard of a canimal.
I would rescue a baby elephant
when it gets lost
Or a baby lizard
stuck in applesauce.
A baby dolphin
bit by a shark
Or a beaver’s dam
made of bark
A baby alligator
without a dad
He ran away
and made his mom mad.
If I ever found
a yellow striped canimal
I’d rescue it too,
because it’s an animal.
Awwww...what a sweet, precious poem! Congrats to DS#4!!
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